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I certainly don't dislike it as much as carbonCore did, but with as little offense intended as possible... my god, how is this getting so much praise? First thing, line ...

This is certainly something. I mean, it's not good, the capital words and exclamation points aren't necessary at all and it's all very disjointed, awkward, and bizarre. But it definitely ...

I miss spelled person as perso No worries, click on the Edit button to the top right of your post and you can edit it to change whatever you need ...

Well, this is... odd. I guess I see why no one's criticized it yet, given the subject matter. Pretty much the only feeling I got from this, though, is that ...

Hey there, GeeLyria. I like this more than the other Christian writings that populate the Featured Works section because it doesn't sacrifice the entire point of a piece of writing ...

Wow, what a long review, Kamas. I'm just going to tl;dr that for those of us that don't have time to read a novel. Boom! Punch under the dress, I ...

I like it, just because it's the opposite of all the equally offensive pieces that have been featured lately. However, aside from these superficial aspects, what are you actually trying ...

To put it in short, this is mediocre, to be honest. The simple inclusion of a religion should not preclude writing quality. This does not necessarily say anything about your ...

First off, I like this piece. Since you asked for a grammar check, I'll do a nitpick (including nitpicks on things other than grammar because I can't resist), but then ...

Before I get on with my review, I would like to note that this is another in an interesting pattern where only those who like the work find it, and ...

Error was right on another account, too. It would be very immature to write a counter article in response to this. Also, hypothetically, if this in itself WAS a counter ...

I'm a be hard on this The diamond girl was flawless, her form and gait pristine. God made her eyes from stars and seas, and stroked his jealousy. Nice meter, ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm not sure what I took that's yours, or whatever you wanted to share with me. I'm sorry if I ripped your heart, do you ...

If this is the kind of stuff you write when you're recovering from a high, go and find a few more joints. The wording and imagery is excellent, and there's ...

First off, the subtlety in the poem is a good thing, not a bad thing. Keep it, don't get rid of it. You shouldn't provide exposition about what the poem ...